Open Poetry #16 |
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Sit and wait for.. |
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Ladycat![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX ![]() |
I sit down silently and wait for Wait for the silence to stop and someone to knock on my door Someone to make me feel Make me feel right and complete again I want to look into to the eyes of a man A man that understands me and everything that I do One that loves me Loves me for everything that I am and everything that I can be Someone who knows Knows how to treat me right and will do so for the rest of my life Is that too much to ask for? I want to be danced Danced around a room for all of his friends to see me with him I want to be held Held until the sun comes up and he can't stand holding me anymore I want to be kissed Kissed with a passion and intensity that will run through my whole body I want to be touched Touch me forever and let me feel our souls combine through that moment in time I want to be their everything Everything they could ever want and need in a woman Someone who will stand beside them Someone who will walk with them forever I want to be loved Loved in a way that I have not felt in a long time Is that too much to ask for? Is that too much to ask for? Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is a wonderful plea..with a sad tone to it. Still there is hope. ![]() ![]() ![]() Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
this is so sad...I hope he comes to the door soon...from the sound of this poem..if you love the way you want to love..you maybe more than enough....plus it is not to much to ask for... alan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, this is lovely. May it come to you one day. It's not too much to ask, and never settle for less If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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