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Theater In the Open |
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Ree Ree Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 56providence, RI |
You seem to far away sometimes even though your right here. I'm hold your hand, together we stand but your not really there. Your eyes, they stare away from me a glaze of lasting pain. I wish you'd smile, for just a while but there's no sign you care. You never laugh or even smile, even when we're together. Though you have my heart when we're apart I wish you'd just laugh with me. I try so hard just to make you smile your smile is fake, a lie. This love seems blind and so unkind. Why can't you smile for me? I know that I can't make you happy, I can't make you life any better. But if for a while I can make you smile then maybe I can smile too! |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
He seems a little mysterious, maybe he likes to keep you guessing.. I hope he smiles for you real soon because laughing is the best feel-good remedy! [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hi Ree Ree, First, I love the title of this. It has a few grammatical problems, however... You seem to far away sometimes (should be "too far away," even though your (you're) right here. I'm hold your hand, together we stand but your not really there. Keep on writin! Cor |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
sometime it is more difficult to have someone do what you want them to do than just accept them, try to understand them OR....Ask. Maybe they will answer. |
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