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PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

0 posted 2001-10-29 12:05 PM

Can you give it up?
Can you let it go?
Will you ever fill your cup?
Will you ever let it go?

Is it the meaning of your life,
or just another strife?

Do you want to touch it?!
Do you want too much of it?

It’s the saga of our life,
yet it’s just another strife.

There is no survival -
too strong is it’s pull.

Can you feel the pain?
Can you hear the thunder?
There never be no gain!
All it does is plunder.

Give it up!
Live it up!

What’s the way to go?

10/9/01

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-10-29 12:29 PM

Do you want to touch it?!
Do you want too much of it?
================================

WOW talk about mirrors found in other's words..
this is my reflection blinding me.....
very cool poem...and cool screen name too

Welcome to Poetry Land ...
so nice to meet you, I look forward to more of your work.
JM

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

2 posted 2001-10-29 01:32 PM

Very good write.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-29 01:36 PM

Great write!! Enjoyed enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

4 posted 2001-10-29 01:55 PM

Very nice. I really enjoyed this.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-10-29 02:14 PM

Interesting write. but I'm not ready to give it up, just yet.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2001-10-29 02:26 PM

PoetryIsLife - very well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

7 posted 2001-10-29 02:47 PM

Thank you all!

Titus

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

8 posted 2001-10-29 04:56 PM

interesting, very interesting

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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