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Quiet desperation
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Quiet desperation |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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Washing away the taste of the night, pursed lips hurriedly slurp down the third cup of coffee. Clenched teeth avoid good mornings. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!That is some wake up. Very well written.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh, I understand these feeling so very well too, where I'm exhausted getting up and trying to rise and shien in the morning! (sigh) May you have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So much said in so few words... the dregs in the coffee pot are sweet compared to some days and saying nothing is the only way to not say too much. This is a hurt I wish you didn't know, dear friend... but well written! |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
needs a person doing the stuff you're writing about huh? yeppers, just wondering who is slurping! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
hehee... you don't sound like a morning person to me.. ^.^ nice write! short and sweet! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Certainly a short but direct statement. Sometimes the lack of words is as harsh as a scream or yell....I know...I do it and don't always like what I didn't say. Nice, liked this. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Whoa! Been there, done that! But was never able to put it into words like you. Well done jwesley |
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