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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
Soothing serene sounds whisper Softly in my ear the things im yearning to hear From you, my solace, and my secret from the world. At the murmur of the chirping crickets I laugh, not even their rhythmic song can shut These heavy eyes which crave relief Because it is you I breathe And you I think and you I dream Therefore I cant sleep Satisfy me and bring me bliss Undo the confusion of your abyss And tell me once and for all that im What you need and what you breathe And what you will forever hold. [This message has been edited by crazy4u (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
lovely, but why confused as to "undisclosed"---are ya talking about your feelings, THEIR feelings, or your identity? grinning here, but truly I understand and sympathize. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: great lines! i enjoyed the alliteration.... this one rolls off the tongue... should be read aloud fine writing here  |
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