Open Poetry #16 |
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Secrets |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! ![]() |
Secrets hidden from your own soul Secrets locked away Never to be told Secrets burning A hole in your heart Leaving you shattered Torn apart No turning back Nor moving ahead Tears in the night From the lives that you've led Can't make it right Suffering silently From a secret unrevieled Placed deep inside... Forever sealed...... [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jules, I really liked this! Great poem... your work is always lovely to read. Secrets....hmm what an intersting topic. Makes a person think ;-) Great write! Take care. Amy ![]() "I could kiss you in |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* secrets can sometimes eat away at us. I hope these one don't. You have written about them very well. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
JulieAnn - Very well written. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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