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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2001-10-28 03:55 PM


Secrets hidden from your own soul
Secrets locked away
Never to be told
Secrets burning
A hole in your heart
Leaving you shattered
Torn apart
No turning back
Nor moving ahead
Tears in the night
From the lives that you've led
Can't make it right
Suffering silently
From a secret unrevieled
Placed deep inside...
Forever sealed......

[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 10-28-2001).]

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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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1 posted 2001-10-28 04:00 PM


Jules,

I really liked this! Great poem...
your work is always lovely to read.
Secrets....hmm what an intersting topic.
Makes a person think ;-) Great write!

Take care.
Amy  

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the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-28 10:04 PM


*sigh* secrets can sometimes eat away at us. I hope these one don't. You have written about them very well.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-10-28 10:07 PM


JulieAnn - Very well written. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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