navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » Noah's Birthday
Open Poetry #16
Post A Reply Post New Topic Noah's Birthday Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-28 01:41 PM


He hold within such heart of gold
and shares with everyone
how fortunate such warmth exists
for with him comes the sun.

Sweet Noah, you are far too wise
for someone oh so young
And lucky girl that holds you tight
and never treats you wrong.

Just a little birthday greeting
your words have often cheered
a day so filled with pain and woe
I'll always hold you dear.


HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETIE, and this would have been a better poem if I wasn't so darn depressed.



© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
1 posted 2001-10-28 01:50 PM


Catalinamoom - Take heart sweet poet...there is always the gift of so many to-morrows. Put a smile on that pretty face as you have made Noah grin I am sure. Chris
  Noah - Once again.....Happy Birthday!! Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-10-28 01:51 PM


HAVE A WONDERFUL AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY, NOAH  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Auguste
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953
By the sea
3 posted 2001-10-28 01:53 PM


I think it was fine.  Happy birthday, Noah.  Thank you for all the kindness, good man.  Thank you, Sandra, for your own kindness.  *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-28 01:58 PM


This was very sweet of you to do Sandra....
AND..once again NOAH!...Happy 18th Birthday!!
~Love and hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-10-28 02:00 PM


Sandra, this was fine, and I hope your cheering up!  HAPPY BIRTHDAY sweet Noah!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Wanda
Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461

6 posted 2001-10-28 02:26 PM


Thank you for writing this birthday greeting for Noah..Noah, I hope you are reading this. "I wish you much love for your birthday,and much joy..today, you are a man and not a boy." Love and hugs to you, Sweet Noah.  Wanda
Flutterwings
Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288
Maine
7 posted 2001-10-28 02:44 PM


It is so hard to write pleasantries when a heart is bleeding. But, your love and compassion came out poetically strong in this very fine read. I'm sure Noah will love every single word. Happy B-day Noah!  
Love and peace Maggie ((~.~))


DawnG
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
8 posted 2001-10-28 03:05 PM


Sandra,

This is a beautiful poem, one that Noah will love and cherish I am sure.

Happy Birthday again Noah!

                                      Dawn

Tracey
Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
9 posted 2001-10-28 04:46 PM


My heavens, isn't young Noah a popular young fella. Three birthday parties going on at once!!! I'll say it again

          HAPPY BIRTHDAY NOAH    

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » Noah's Birthday

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary