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Walk About |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Walk About marine blue winds blow leafing roads across my times windows to my world brilliant golds gilding memories of years' past scenes all that was to me circles turn upon one but with key to latch I find my way again |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Sunshine, This is one I have read several time and every time I see something new. I like the feel of it and the way it makes you reread it and find the different things it says. It is a short poem that has a lot of depth. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, once we find our way, that's the only key we need! Kathleen |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such a beautiful poem about rites of passage! (sigh) I believe that we all will find our way as long as we follow our hearts and take our dreams to the extent while also admiring the simple beauty that surrounds us all! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sunshine, So few words, so much depth. Great write. Dawn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful walk about, Karilea! Lovely! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Walking life's long road Recall Streets of Memories Step down Future's Way |
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