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Water to Rain |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Every the October with of Sometimes I smile, there so surrender soft I exactly away will reach?
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hold? exactly when and still its when I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-27-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I like this one alot, thanks for sharing. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, it is hard to catch. Elusive love, elusive peace, elusive dreams. Nicely written, greeneyes. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* It may be hard to catch but as long as we believe it in our hearts, it will someday find us. A beautiful poem that spoke from your heart with all the yearning that you feel.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is wonderfully used here Lauren, the idea of it is fascinating. . . I like it. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This is very cool, I liked it alot....I'll have to read more by you.... |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
This is nice. And it is a place we have all been at one time or another. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I think it's normal to compare our moods to the seasons, ie Autumn into Winter equals a desolation, coldness, sadness etc. but sometimes it's the perfect opportunity to reevaluate and renew too. (But hibernation sounds good too at times! *L*) I enjoyed reading your thoughts Music, tonal clear & pure, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indeed it is my friend. Wonderful write Lauren. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How often does our mood change with the seasons, and fall is a moody one. I loved your poem Lauren, very nice. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Wistful write~ Packed with a longing and an ache. A soulful elergy. Well done, even tho it did bring a tear to my eyes...  Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Walker~ thanks for stopping by....wonderful to see you... ~~ Midnitesun~ I appreciate your thoughtful comment.....thanks my friend... ~~ Startime~ sometimes it is hard to believe, I always hope....thank you... ~~ Sven~ thank you for your wonderful reply my friend....so glad you enjoyed... ~~ JulieAnn~ I hope you do...and thank you for telling me you were here.... ~~ The RustyKnight~ indeed it is....for some longer then others...thank you for peeking in.. ~~ chansondegeste~ *l* yes indeed, I could use the sleep....thank you for coming by, I appreciate your thoughts.... ~~ Gentle Spirit~ thank you for being you....  my friend....~~ Mysteria~ moody indeed as we prepare ourselves for long winter nights....thanks my friend... ~~ Flutterwings~ thanks for understanding... and dont cry....all will be good....peace to you as well... ~~ love and peace to all....thanks much for the replies...  Greeneyes~  ******* I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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OctoberSky Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 12 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And yet its fun when both want to get wet...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Yes indeed it is....thank you JamesMichael~ ~~ Greeneyes~ ***** [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Greeneyes - I really enjoyed this - well done, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
you're so pretty, this poem suits you, I can picture you looking up.....wondering! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful reflection....you wrote this very well. Yes, how far is away? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren, I really enjoyed this beautiful write. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a very nice poem. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you to all that responded...I really appreciate the comments and thoughtful words....it makes writing worth it!! Love and Peace to all.... ~~ Greeneyes~ ***** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautifully done! Its been too long since I've read anything from you. Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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