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0 posted 2001-10-27 06:15 PM


I need to make this bigger

I need to make this bigger,
this feeling that
I hold
one that will take you in
I’d give to you
this gold

I need to somehow
amplify this
feeling so unreal,
for it is very magical
and it’s swirl
is beauty’s feel

it has a firm, tenacious hold
but still soft in
touch, and smooth
it holds me ever warmly
while it sounds so much
like truth

it has a bit of sing-song
that makes me want
to dance
and one would almost
think, that it hinged
upon romance

well perhaps it does,
this feeling, but a
universal love
is more of what this
feeling is, carried by
wings of dove

then I would have it soar
to you, to multiply
good cheer,
to take away the dark
from you, chase
away your fear

yes, I need to make this bigger
this feeling that
is gold
and send to you on silver
wings, a gift of
hugs to hold



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-27 06:20 PM




BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) I just know if we work together and our friendship and love all grows across the world, this harmony will get so big peace and light can be made possible for all! (smiles) May our wings of the heart flutter and rise to this loving dream! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet Karilea, this is sooooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-10-27 06:25 PM


yes, I need to make this bigger
this feeling that
is gold
and send to you on silver
wings, a gift of
hugs to hold
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Karilea...THIS is just beautiful!  Perfect!
~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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3 posted 2001-10-27 07:26 PM


And you just did...you made it fill the whole sky above passions with your love where we can each bask in its warmth. Magnificent. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-10-27 09:01 PM


Karilea--A hug from you is as big as your heart...and that is very, very big!!!!

Hugs!

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5 posted 2001-10-27 09:15 PM


Love has may faces and you filled in this one to be a beauty.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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6 posted 2001-10-28 03:30 AM


"yes, I need to make this bigger
this feeling that
is gold
and send to you on silver
wings, a gift of
hugs to hold"


Hugs from you are so big,
and welcoming in their hold.
Each little hug of Sunshine
geels like riches beyond gold!

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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