Open Poetry #16 |
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Trash Cans (written by doreen's daughter, 8 years old) |
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AliciaRose New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 8 |
"Trash Cans" A trash can is smelly and jelly is in it so think about it before you stink!!! Trash cans have bags that rot and get bad stains. When yo u take the garbage out, beware, because you'll stink!!! Everybody takes out the garbage and everybody gets stains on them and people think they reek. But what if you were taking out the garbage the person who took it out before you is gonna think you reek!! So, I taught you a lesson not to make fun of people. - by AliciaRose 9/23/2001 |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hi Alicia... I just took the garbage out - Just before I read your poem about it. Know what? I think I STINK!!! ![]() You wrote a very sweet poem about a very stinky subject here, young lady..!!! ![]() [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-23-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
That's quite a poem you wrote there AliciaRose, I liked it very much. And next time I take my trashcan out I'll be thinking of you Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem, we cannot take out the garbage without getting some stains on us. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I agree the garbage smells and leaves stains. But hey nothing is perfect. Great job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
AliciaRose~ What do you mean garbage reeks? I cannot believe my kitty-cat ears! In those cans are lots of treats So take back your anti-junk jeers! ~Stickin'Kitten ![]() P.S. Was your poem a message to mom about not wanting to take the garbage out? ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-23-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Smart girl! Alot of things stink for alot of different reasons. Some things were just made to stink. It's who they are. And who are we to make fun. Great poem! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alicia~ It's so good to see you again, sweetie~ Nice job ! ![]() *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes my computer trash can holds stinky stuff too! Thanks for sharing your sweet smelling "stinky" poem. And I hate taking out the trash, but hate to leave it inside where it likes to grow new strange things. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well the apple doesn't fall far from the tree, or garbage can! This was a very wonderful but "smelly" poem, good for you! ~* A smile is just a frown turned upside down *~ |
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Siofra![]()
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
What a wonderful poem this is. ![]() ![]() ![]() I am many. |
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