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0 posted 2001-10-27 09:21 AM




Passionate Senryu
By: Noah Eaton
10/27/01

Melting Kiss

Melting lips sway hot
Caressing her soft warm thighs
Climbing passions crest


Vanilla Thoughts

Silken laces hum
From vanilla lingerie
That your soft heart wears


Essence

Surrender to me
Shower me with your kisses
Touching your heaven


Breathless

Consumed by passion
Enraptured in desire
Breathless for your love



© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-27 09:44 AM


WOW!!!Now this is a passionate way to start the day.   I so love passion filled mornings. BRAVO, Noah, WELL DONE.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-10-27 09:44 AM



These are beautiful!  Well done!

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3 posted 2001-10-27 06:10 PM


Gotta call my girlfriend after reading these...James
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4 posted 2001-10-27 07:15 PM


Noah,

   I LOVE these Very well done

Hugs,
Tara

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5 posted 2001-10-27 07:42 PM



Beautifully sensual senryus, Noah!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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6 posted 2001-10-27 08:35 PM


Noah; Wow!! Noah, I need a fan!  W.
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7 posted 2001-10-27 08:39 PM


This is me, kisses, scent of vanilla, love and passion what more can one want, at least for tonight. Great Senryu, I love it.
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