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The Gift of Yhi
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The Gift of Yhi |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Goddess of light creator of my heart to you I give my thanks I give thanks for this place created in your sight and formed by your footsteps I give thanks for these of the air for these of the land and for these of the sea I give thanks for every dawn that greets my waking eyes the promise that you will always be with us and that someday we will always be with you there but most of all Goddess of Dreamtime and light of my soul I give you thanks for your greatest gift of all she who was born of the flower stalk of the tree the embodiment of your power my companion of your creation I will honor and care for her as I honor and care for you Goddess of creation and light of my heart Yhi is the creator Goddess of the Karraur, an aboriginal group of Australia, for more about her, go here: Story of Yhi or here: Yhi Brings Life to the World --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well done, Sir Sven!  Your talent is wonderful! Keep up the great work for this series!  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!!! Thank YOU for sharing your creative muse with us.  Charisma |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Another wonderful Goddess poem! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Sven, this is gorgeous I really like how you do these |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven, Your time spent researching and then writing these blessed poems are a gift to all who read them. Thanks. Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A most excellent rendition for yet another goddess of the sun....and you know that I take such delight in these.... well done, Sir! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this lots, and you are doing a most impressive group of poems. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, thank you my friend. . . and I shall indeed keep it up for the series. . . Charisma, the pleasure is all mine my friend. . . thank you for reading. . Munda, thank you my friend. . . there will be more. . . SEA, thank you for reading. . . I'm glad that you're enjoying these. . . Isis, I'm glad that I can be a blessing. . . and to tell the stories once more. . . thank you. . . Decaflame, I know that one who is the light as you are enjoys these very much. . . thank you. . . Sandra, thank you. . . I'm glad that you're enjoying them. . . and I hope that you'll continue to enjoy the rest of them. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
sven, lovely! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Exquisite Sven! You are painting such glorious pictures with your words. I really enjoyed this vision you shared. Sincerely, Regina |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven, this whole collection of Goddess poems just takes my breath away...once again, well done! ~Time has cast a spell on you, So that you won't ever forget me.~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (edited 09-25-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is very beautifully done, I agree you are so creative sir... Greeneyes~ ***** I keep my ideals, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The gr8 voice of the Northlands now honors the land down under. Bravo! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Chelsea, thank you my friend. . . Regina, thank you. . . I'm glad that you're enjoying. . . and it's my honor to share my vision with you. . . Enchantress, thank you my friend. . . you honor me with you words. . . Greeneyes, thank you so much. . . and thank you for reading. . . Interloper, thank you oh great voice of the Southland. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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