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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-10-27 12:04 PM



The sun sets
winking rosy rays
before disappearing
over the horizon
I'm glowing
knowing
I am not lost
as darkness sinks in


moonlight catches
not upon a face of fear
but one filled with peace,
contentment,
for someone~

finally, one with courage
has found the key
unlocking my secrets
examining them without fear


The stars,  moon, & sun
bear silent witness
to this miracle
for unconditional love
has found it's way
to me & now,
I am free...


~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 10-27-2001).]

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Amused Cupid
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1 posted 2001-10-27 12:16 PM


Lovely poem you have written here. Unconditional love is so precious, and such a blessing.  
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-10-27 08:34 AM



All of the best things in life should be given unconditionally...

this is lovely, and I enjoyed your presentation...

Startime
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3 posted 2001-10-27 12:13 PM


Unconditional love is the only kind worth having. You are blessed to have it light up you heart. BRAVO!!! I was smiling with joy for you as I read this romantic poem.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-27-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-10-27 02:36 PM


once the key has been found. . . it should never be hidden again. . .

well done my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-10-27 06:27 PM




                    The stars,  moon, & sun
                    bear silent witness
                    to this miracle
                    for unconditional love
                    has found it's way
                    to me & now,
                    I am free..."

oh, y es, oh yes, exactly how it should be...free and peaceful

Kathleen
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"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

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6 posted 2001-10-27 06:33 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) This is sooooo romantic, sweet R.T! (smiles) A sunrise of sweet unconditional love touching your sweet heart! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-10-27 06:39 PM


The stars,  moon, & sun
bear silent witness
to this miracle
for unconditional love
has found it's way
to me & now,
I am free...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tier~This says it all!...and this is beautiful!  ~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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8 posted 2001-10-27 07:35 PM


Tiersdin, This is a lovely - to be filled with inner peace - that's the key. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 2001-10-27 07:42 PM


Yes, unconditional love.

"I am not lost
as darkness sinks in"

How timely, as it fits perfectly with some thoughts I've had today.


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