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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-10-26 12:16 PM




~*~

poets delight in
leaving thought on wave's salt brim
wanderlust's deep wit

~*~



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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-10-26 12:24 PM


delightful reading
words woven from heart and soul
shared for all to read

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-10-26 12:25 PM


Lady,
Beautifully done. Enjoyed

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2001-10-26 12:42 PM


poets delight in
leaving thought on wave's salt brim
wanderlust's deep wit
.................
that they do

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-10-26 12:46 PM


yes, they do.  Wonderful write for Friday!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Nan
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5 posted 2001-10-26 01:26 PM


A pleasant weekend
Looking for some nice Sunshine
To send rays to me

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6 posted 2001-10-26 02:55 PM


Dear Lady in White - wow, I wish I could learn to write like this. Wonderful! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
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7 posted 2001-10-26 07:08 PM


Perfectly said for a Friday night. Wanderlust is filling you with wit as always. I like it, very much.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-10-27 09:51 AM


Yes they do, and have a wonderful weekend!

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

Professor Gloom
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9 posted 2001-10-27 12:38 PM


Lady in White writes,

poets delight in
leaving thought on wave's salt brim
wanderlust's deep wit

Leaves us poetic delights,
Not quite as a hymn,
But a wonderful short bit.

salt to the poet,
the brim of emotion
margarita taste.


Gloom

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10 posted 2001-10-27 07:09 PM




(smiles) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (smiles) There's nothing more beautiful than losing oneself in the beauty of dreams and visions! (big hugggssssss) Sucha  beautiful haiku! (kiss on cheek) Muah! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2001-10-27 07:35 PM


this is cool, I love these words

Kathleen
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