Open Poetry #16 |
Someday |
BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
Someday we will join Before the eyes of God and become one When that day arrives I can only imagine The depths we can explore The hights we will attain For it's you that I adore Being apart is causing me pain For us to be together, my dear Is no simple task at all We have obsticles to overcome The biggest is our fear Alas we both have tender hearts And while others have drawn from us All which they could take It's still beyond our nature To turn our backs upon them now And leave them in the wake We will overcome our fear somehow Because if I can't have you My true love I'd rather be with God above [This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-26-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Benita, this is so so sweet! God has prepared the perfect love for you, and when the time is right, you will embrace him eternally! (smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so very beautiful and filled with love. Your vow will come true I am sure and then you will both have your hearts desire. Very well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
True love waits. At least thats what the song says. Anyway, this is a nice poem. Hugs, Deb |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
WOW....you hit home to me. I have too soft a hurt and am having to learn to say "no". It is so hard. Goood luck in this task to both you and your future spouse. Red |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
oops..sorry...in previous reply replace hurt with heart. DUH. Love your read. Red |
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