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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-10-26 06:35 PM


This writing
is like
p    u    l   l  i   n   g
the words from
corners of a weary inspiration.
I am thrown
every
            which

way
drowning in the inability to create
without tears
wishing for the
s           l         o         w
movement of peace massaging my devices.
There are nights when the quakes come furiously
STOMPING over my will to sleep
and I am *dreaming*
of the ability to create again.
But this writing is like
P     U     L     L    I     N    G
the words from
corners of weary inspiration.
Just let me breathe
and
Free
myself of this need to get it all perfect.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-26 06:41 PM


Different and effective.
RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-10-26 06:42 PM


*Massaging your temples in circular motions*
It will be all right my dear friend...I will s-o-o-t-h-e  your ::::STRESS::::
a
w
a
y.....

((hugs))

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-26-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-10-26 09:12 PM


Boy
          isnt that the
                          truth of the
matter....I liked this...

                              thanx.

Startime
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4 posted 2001-10-26 09:13 PM


Ah but even in your stress you pattern a perfect poem that shares with us the feelings you are having. BRAVO!!! me thinks you need a party to unwind.  Either that or a hunky member of the male gender to give you a feel better night.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-10-26 09:16 PM


Jenn, I do love the way you ramble and just sort of spill it out all down the page!  Enjoyed, Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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6 posted 2001-10-26 11:03 PM


don't pull so hard. . .  

there are lots and lots of reasons that I like this. . .but, you already know them. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-10-26 11:10 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Jennifer, I am so so sorry to hear this, I can feel the stress and exhaustion through these words! (sad sigh) I pray that over this weekend you can find some time to relax and be with all your loved ones and have a good time and have some fun! (kiss on cheek) Our hearts are all with you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-10-26 11:22 PM


I like your use of formatting here.  Very effective.  I learned long ago that the words will come when they are ready and should never be forced.  Sometimes we simply need to inspire ourselves, my friend.   *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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9 posted 2001-10-27 10:29 AM


Cool write Jenn, and loved the format you used it "did its thing perfectly"  

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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10 posted 2001-10-27 05:10 PM


Jenn.
Take a bubble bath in very warm water, surrounded by scented candles, and soft music.....relax....let go of the stress for a bit and it won't come back so bad.   I promise.
Love and hugs,
Kathy

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