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Lucie
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0 posted 2001-10-26 08:04 PM


Its my Amethyst you think I lost....
Someone is gonna pay the cost.
Cause it isn't really lost you see
was a thief that took this thing from me.

Its my rhyme that seems to be misplaced,
which really is a huge disgrace.
I've been looking for it everywhere
even Interloper's underwear.  

I've looked high and low.. looked inbetween
no one will tell me where it last was seen.
Don't know where that silly rhyme could be...
Oh look there it is.. inside of me.  

© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-10-26 08:10 PM


So, you found the amethyst.
Just one thing, tell me this
was it the proctologist
or simple gynecologyst?


Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-10-26 08:49 PM


LOL, hi Lucie! Glad to meet you. You haven't lost your rhyme, and bet your amethyst is right there on the ground, waiting to be found. Hope this bit of tomfoolery is ok with you.  
Nan
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3 posted 2001-10-26 10:57 PM


Lucie's been gone a long long time
She even thought she'd lost her rhyme
But here at Passions lost and found
We've kept her rhyme all safe and sound

Dear Lucie better write some more
Because we've locked the Passions door
With her inside amongst us all
She'll not escape her muse's call...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-10-26 11:34 PM




(smiles) The beauty of rhyme is always in your beautiful heart, sweet Lucie! (big hugggssssss) You always write such beautiful visions! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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5 posted 2001-10-27 03:17 AM


Lucie,
I've no idea where you've been and know nothing about you in Interlopers pants! But don't you ever go away again. ROTFLMAO

DawnG
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6 posted 2001-10-27 04:24 AM


Lucie,

This is too funny. I was not around for the first batch of fun, but am anxious to read the reunion.

                         Dawn

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