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RocketRide
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0 posted 2001-10-26 07:25 PM


tomorrow i will have to wake up [a work of force]
and go about the business of trying
[i dislike doing that]
more, though...i dislike sitting in class
when there is nothing in it for me
when i am all that i will ever contain
[so my soul tells me in solace]
and am content in that

tonight, perhaps, i will dream
of a world where there is no tomorrow
and i am not asked to bow down
to the promise of world that will never live up

sometimes i wake up still dreaming
and can't remember what i said before...

10/3/01

peace,
rocketride

~~Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the little voice at the end of the day that says...I'll try again tommorrow~~

© Copyright 2001 Christie Clark - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-10-26 08:00 PM


Hi, you know, I always felt like that about school, and work, and daily life. It sometimes seems like such a waste of writing time.  
Sandra

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-26 08:31 PM


I just don't want to wake up at all.....I would rather be living my fantasy than open my eyes to reality. *giggling* now why does saying that make me feel so strange? Great writing.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

snowpants
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3 posted 2001-10-26 09:01 PM


I soooo know what you mean, RocketRide...very well put...great write!

sp  

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-10-26 11:47 PM




(sigh) I know just what you mean, the real world can be so touch sometimes, though I always keep the spirit of youth in me, and love to dream the day away of all my fantasies! (sigh) Wonderful thoughts, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Christie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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