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Tender Love (a tanka)
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Tender Love (a tanka) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Tender Love (for dave, of course) Your love touches me So tenderly… deep inside My love grows for you Stronger by each passing day My heart beats for you alone. Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Tara...this is so sweet and stuffed full of love in just a few words. Good one! ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to see the words from a soft and tender heart...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't know what a tanka is, I must admit...but this so heartfelt and beautiful, rose. I hope he knows!  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Nancy - Thank you.. I'm glad you liked it James - I'm glad you stopped in.. thank you for your kind words. serenity - Tankas are like haikus.. but instead of the 5-7-5 formant.. they have 5-7-5-7-7.. and are about love. I love them  I'm glad you liked it Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is pretty, Tara. Someone is a very lucky guy. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwww, this is so sweet, sweet Tara! (sigh) Your love for Dave shines in this beautiful romantic expression! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Muah! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey RosePetals! I'm happy to see you experiencing true love! You deserve it my talented poet friend : ) Love, RosePetal |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Michael - I'm the lucky one not him. Thanks for stopping in  Noah - Thank you for coming in to read I'm glad you liked it.Rosepetal - Thank you. I'm happy you liked it.. it came out easily. *hugs*Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rosepetals, This is so loving and I am happy to see you so in love, enjoyed very much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
YOU'RE the lucky one? /boggle heh. i think not, dear. but i love you right back, with all my heart. -Dave A.K.A. -Napalm |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Cerenity - Thank you I am very much in love at the moment... and it is wonderful. I'm glad you stopped in.Dave - Yes dear that is what I said ... I'M the lucky one I love you... you're my inspiration for these poems, you fill my heart with so much love.  [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh how absolutely wonderful. Love fills the air at passions. *sigh* now this is a poem I absolutely adore. Congradulations on your love, Tara and Dave. It sure feels like you two are wrapped in the warmth and passion of it. BRAVO!!! There is nothing so beautiful as seeing two people in love.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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