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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-10-26 01:47 PM


Raspberry Delight
By: Noah Eaton
10/26/01

Vanilla eyes tear up in romantic intentions
Laying beside you in bed, in the aroma of potpourri
You’re wearing your magenta lingerie, with a stuffed animal tucked between your arm
Your finger in your mouth, licking seductive raspberries

Raspberry passion brewing in spices and ginseng
Incense burning brightly as I embrace you in yearning
Long awaiting your hot sweet raspberry kiss
Your tongue licking glazed lips, igniting passions burning

Illuminating the room with sensual flavor
Lingering raspberries with whipped cream into your mouth
Sucking them gently, licking the juice off all my fingers
Embracing your lips in sizzling lingering kiss, lovers heavens pour out

Caressing your warm body, between raspberry lingerie
Freesia whispers light the room in every sensual cry
Trembling in deep sigh, feeling the beating of your luscious heart
Living lovers dreams together in Raspberry Delight…

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
BtwnRockandHardPlace
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1 posted 2001-10-26 02:07 PM


mmmmmmmmmmmmm, I'm hungry, not for food either!

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

Rodney Belcher
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2 posted 2001-10-26 02:20 PM


has a sudden urge for...umm...raspberries, yeah thats it  

Lets Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

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3 posted 2001-10-26 02:30 PM


My goodness Noah!!  We are just going to have to find you some raspberry lips to kiss.  Everyone has kissing on the brain lately.  
Good write...Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-10-26 02:32 PM


sounds like wonderful desert Noah!!  yummieeeee

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

lunatic
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5 posted 2001-10-26 02:35 PM


Wow!  I DO like raspberries but I LOVE cherries.  Think I could substitute?

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

[This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 10-26-2001).]

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-10-26 03:30 PM


I like all the thoughts here Noah...James
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7 posted 2001-10-26 03:50 PM


Raspberries, cherries, strawberries..they all are yummy! *kisses Noah's cheek* You are a real sweetie pie!

xoxo

Startime
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8 posted 2001-10-26 07:12 PM


*giggling* now this is certainly a tasty delight. Very well done, Noah. Senually flavored.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-10-26 07:13 PM


Noah

Goodness...this was just simply
beautiful for lack of better words.
I love your writing...it leaves me
with such peace and love in my heart.
I am sorry to be responding so late to
your work...but forever grateful to be
able to read it. you inspire me.

take care.
amy  

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

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