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spiked
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since 2000-01-13

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Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2001-09-21 09:25 PM

I’ll Be There

When pressure seems to hold you down
Just stop and take a look around
I’ll be there
When doubt consumes your thoughts away
I’m always just a call away
I’ll be there
When you feel that you have lost your way
Burnt by the pains of everyday
I’ll be there
I’ll hold you when you’re feeling low
Lift your spirits let you know
I’ll be there
So look not in some checkered past
Your future is coming much too fast
I’ll be there
I do not always say the words
But know that it is true
I’ll be there

© Copyright 2001 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved

Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27

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Charlottesville,VA USA

1 posted 2001-09-21 10:01 PM

I would love to have someone like you...to be there! I hope the one you're speaking to in this poem knows how lucky she is!
Good write!! I enjoyed!!

Kitty

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-09-21 10:09 PM

lmao...learned this one the "hard" way...

yer precious...

Topheth
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Posts 297
Texas

3 posted 2001-09-21 10:17 PM

Quite nice... enjoyed it.

spiked
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Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2001-09-22 12:54 PM

Thank you Kitty
Serene you know first hand, never really know where I am huh.
much appreciated topheth

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5 posted 2001-09-22 03:10 AM

Spiked~
Endearing write~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 98
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6 posted 2001-10-26 03:17 PM

SPIKED! Yer hot honey! mmmm.

*~*~*~*~
Benita
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The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

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just out of reach

7 posted 2001-10-26 03:24 PM

Very nice, and I believe that you really would be there. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2001-10-26 04:36 PM

Hey Rock and Hard Place---he's even better in person! (serenity exits, grinning...)

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9 posted 2001-10-26 07:05 PM

What a nice, reassuring poem. It's nice when someone can be counted on, and it sounds to me like you are that kind of guy. Thanks for sharing this.

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