Open Poetry #16 |
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- Forever Friends - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA ![]() |
![]() My friend, if only words could paint how much you mean to me there's no one else who can compare to your sweet grace and beauty ![]() Tony, since you came into my life I haven't been the same you showed me how to laugh once more you smiled away my pain ![]() You filled my tears with rainbows, you're the sun which lights my way, you warm my skin with understanding and bring peace to my every day ![]() When I needed someone to listen you were always there, my faithful friend 'til the end you're a miracle, my breath of fresh air ![]() You're an angel born of heaven like none I've ever known, and, as long as you're in this world I'll never walk alone ![]() My friend, through life's uncertainty I know this much is true that I am truly blessed to find a kindred spirit in you ![]() By your side, I can be myself ~ safe to reveal each layer of soul, my zig to my zag ~ two peas in a pod, 'Greek God' ![]() ![]() No matter what may happen I'll be right here for you lean on me, and hold my hand together, we'll get through ![]() One thing I know I can count on, one treasure that shall always be... that you and I will be friends forever joined by the soul for eternity By Melissa P. Monette Tony, how many brownie points do I get now? ![]() Fili mou, s'agapo! ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful tribute to one you care much for. Well done Melissa. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
I didn't write it, but it's just who I feel about my best friend. Well written, thank you! *~*~*~*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Melissa~ You owe me 1 million monopoly dollars! ![]() ![]() ![]() Hugs, ~Krista ![]() Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Melissa, The very first poem I read this morning and what a way to start my day here at Passions. This is absolutely wonderful and your music choice, well that along with the poem was enough to get the tears flowing. Yes that is exactly what it is like with myself and my best friends too. ![]() Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and sweet! (smiles) You are such an angel to us all, and your sweet words will forever touch his heart! (smiles) We all are lucky to have such a loving friend like you! (kiss on cheek) Muah! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Melissa, I am so happy to hear this happiness in your voice, and that someone special is treating you well. May it last forevermore. Sandra |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Right on! I LOVE it! HOORAY! Write on! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy Well??? and i thought I was your best friend ![]() ![]() and where is my poem? LOL this is so sweet of you to write for him, btw, have i met him before? you're the most generous person i know, this is so like you to do for someone, yes, i think it's great! ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Melissa - Ahhh, this is a wonderful tribute to friendship. Very nice. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Melissa...this is a wonderful occurence and you write of it so sweetly. A very tender and touching tribute to the treasure of friendship! ![]() |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Everyone should have a wonderful, true, friend like you! I'm sure Tony absolutely loved this! Very beautiful Melissa xoxo, RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Melissa....what a beautiful write to your best friend! Wonderful! ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
You're an angel born of heaven like none I've ever known, and, as long as you're in this world I'll never walk alone My friend, through life's uncertainty I know this much is true that I am truly blessed to find a kindred spirit in you --------------------------------------------- MEL... You write my heart with this!! Beautiful poem about a true friend. You and Tony are both very lucky to have one another. I am so happy to see you have someone who treats you as they should. Sorry I've been out of touch lately...life has been crazy. I will email soon! Take care. Amy ![]() "I could kiss you in |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You have painted it perfectly and I am sure you just made a ton of brownie points. ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
what a lucky friend to have you so beautifully in their corner! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
It's a wonderful blessing to have a friend so dear to your heart. Lovely tribute. A dozen brownie points for you! Hugs, Deb |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This kind of friendship is one to be treasured, and you wrote of it so well. Beautifully done Melissa. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no doubt. . . I'm with Chelsea. . . where's my poem too??? LOL ![]() seriously though, this is wonderful. . . you tell it so well. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is a beautiful poem for your friend. So glad you have found someone who makes you so happy that you want to sing it from the rooftops ( or keyboard!! lol). Simply gorgeous Melissa If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I thought I've commented on this but I guess my net connection failed me....so here I am again. To tell you how beautiful it is.... I have loved it sooooo much....and you are both lucky to have such a wonderful friendship. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Love this! It's exactly my own feelings. You've written it so beautifully! Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, He'll love it! He's lucky to have such a wonderful person as a close friend. You'll have him eatin out of your palm when he reads this ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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tony kokko New Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 1 |
Melybee my little glika:I love your poem; Where do I collect the million Monopoly dollars? Your brownie points are in the mail ![]() Words cannot express how moving this poem was. I feel all warm and tingly reading it and I only hope that I can do you justice by writting something as beautiful for you as you have for me... [This message has been edited by tony kokko (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now this is pure poetry...when the one you write of replies so lovingly. Melissa, a great poem, great photo. And Tony, nice to meet you! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- This truly is a beautiful write. Such a wonderful way to show your love for a very special friend...a forever friend. ![]() Nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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