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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-10-26 08:31 AM


To Whom It May Concern

Of all the poets I’ve impart
Yours is the dearest to my heart.
You surrey me soft senses glove
Be it common or be it love.

Your words sweep mystic to my ear
They steep me full of reap and cheer
They finger harps that ring my chime
Plant green valleys while still there’s time.

Your words flurry like sifts of snow
Like puffs of clouds that shift and blow.
They fill my heart with lift and treat
Each word, a drop of nectar sweet

They zeal the wind, refresh the air
They thresh my world with fresh that’s fair.
They cradle me with lullabies
And anchors me with loving ties.

Butterflies, I cannot catch, with
Hue and colors, I cannot match.



© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-26 08:35 AM


To whomever it may concern, this is beautiful and I am sure they will love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nan
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2 posted 2001-10-26 09:00 AM


Oh Sy... You're just so darned easy to please...
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3 posted 2001-10-26 09:09 AM




what poet might not hear this song
then carefully place to heart
these words to carry all day long
bless he from whence they depart



Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-10-26 09:16 AM


Startime,
A bouquet of words for a pretty lady. *L*

Nan,
That way I can gather all the pleases I can carry. *L*

Lady,
Thank you for the ROSE. *L*

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-10-26 09:26 AM


Of all the poets words ... that I have read
Yours have woven my heart with golden thread
I hope you truly know how dear you are to me
How grateful I am for all you share beyond the poetry

You color my world in wisdom's golden hue
I wonder if you know how much I learn from you
You teach me of things I've never dared to dream
Make me believe my wishes are more than silly schemes

You wrap me in your tender rhymes
Play my heart strings till they chime
You gave this tired moth back her butterfly wings
So in turn I build you word pedestals deemed for kings

This butterfly ... you have indeed captured
Never doubt you leave me eternally enraptured

~*~

*winkiewinkie*
You make me *sigh-on-high* my sweet Stinky
love ya
     me


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 10-26-2001).]

SmartChick
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6 posted 2001-10-26 09:31 AM


This is a lovely poem. I bet she'll love it too.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-10-26 09:40 AM


JM,
I'll have to blow on this raspberry tea, it's too hot to sip. Winkiewinkie

SmartChick,
As I said before, it' just a bouquet of words. *L*

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8 posted 2001-10-26 09:55 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Your beautiful sweet heart always shines with love and inspiration, and makes us all sing! (sigh) Beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-10-26 10:33 AM


Mistletoe,
And thank you for your beautiful replies.

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10 posted 2001-10-26 10:40 AM


Me loves her too, sy! How can ya not? No sugar in my coffee when I read you, babycakes, you are sweet enough!  
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-10-26 12:19 PM


Serenity,
Love it, Love it. *L*

Irish Rose
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12 posted 2001-10-26 06:15 PM


Seymour, this is fabulous. I wanted to take this chance to thank you for your kind reply to the post I did for Maureen. Thank you.
I may not be around for a long time due to personal health issues but I sure enjoy reading and I am an avid Passions reader and if nothing else, will continue to do that until I heal.  Bless you and keep writing!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-10-26 06:28 PM


Kathleen,
Thank you and I'll say a prayer for you swift recovery. *L*

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14 posted 2001-10-26 06:39 PM


Nice note of emote for one who would also have my vote. Wink.....ie
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15 posted 2001-10-26 06:45 PM


Seymour~

Sweetest flit within your wit
Would not have to catch 'I'
For from thee, I'd not fly~
Buttered on the soft of wing
Just to hear poetic sing~

You are very smoooooth~
Love n' hugs n' other fancy stuff~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2001-10-27 08:46 AM


RSWells,
Big thank you for the vote.

Marge,
And I would do the same for you. Love Sy

Janet Marie
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17 posted 2002-02-02 01:22 PM


  




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