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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2001-10-26 12:44 PM

MOURNING

The silent sounds of the nights mystery
filling the darkest depths of earth and wood
slowly disperse into nights history,
awakening the daylight as it should.
As time adjusts to the newborn mourning
nocturnal shadows escape from the light.
Desperately holding ground in warning,
not for loss but to give into the night.
Through the murkiness of its surroundings
the day struggles as it tries to break free.
A babbling brook becomes lifes boundings,
a feeding vein for all to share and be.
Life allowed to eternally spring forth
'til night retakes the east and stars shine north.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-10-26 02:24 AM

ct,
I'm really likin' this. Nice job!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-10-26 03:25 AM

CTOwen~
This is a thoughtful piece of writing~
Very nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-26 09:42 AM

*sigh* a sonnet that weaves a gentle spell around me making me long for a night filled with this kind of beauty. As morning wakes the night rests to awaken again come the velvet blanket of darkness. *sigh* this one deserves a kiss for sure.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-26-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-10-26 09:47 AM

Ctowen,
A very nice write, I enjoyed the read.

Amused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 40

5 posted 2001-10-27 12:20 PM

Love your poem

Nature has a way of knowing exactly what to do and when, great capturing of it's essence.

Kevin Taylor
Member

since 1999-12-23

Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada

6 posted 2001-10-28 09:27 PM

Sonnet's 'll do it to me every time!
Thank you!

Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you get there."

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-10-28 09:31 PM

another well written piece of natural poetry.
thanx.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-10-28 09:38 PM

Lovely imagery here CT. Lovely poem

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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