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A Special Star
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A Special Star |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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A Special Star I stared up into the sky Looking for a special star One caught my eye, I reached for it Very closely I put it to my heart Endlessly, it shined so bright You're the shiniest star in the sky Captivating me with sparkle that will never die Young and pulsating, it's brightness grew Until one day, I fianlly understood This glowing star was my love for you [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-25-2001).] |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
I enjoyed this poem very much. I hope that everything works out for you. ~Laura~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Sweet! Maree  |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Very beautiful indeed. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet Joanna! (smiles) He is the sweet star of your heart and may his love always shine for you, as you are a star to us all! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very beautiful.....  keep shinning~ Greeneyes~ ***** I keep my ideals, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
RosePetal, This is very beautiful!!  Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
RosePetal, A bright idea, this poem. Like the imagry. |
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