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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-25 07:19 PM

When Dreams Touch Reality

I read your words and dream
sighing with desire,
hope filling my still thoughts
passions set on fire

Weaving my dreams of love
fantasy flows strong
as my heart starts to beat
singing a lover's song

Your words lift my spirit
as you write love in poem
giving hope place to live
and love a new found home

Then I see just a screen
with a man still unknown
but words that touch the heart
this screen has to me shown

I sigh with softest heart
as I weave fantasy
and still open my eyes
When Dreams Touch Reality

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-10-25 07:21 PM

Hi Karen...my are we not the romantic this
evening....enjoyed this..very nice.

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

2 posted 2001-10-25 07:27 PM

Karen; I enjoyed this very romatic poem. It is good to be enjoying your writing once again. Wanda

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-10-25 08:16 PM

giving hope place to live
and love a new found home
========================
What a beautiful phrase ... can I borrow it

~*~
hope lives in the heart
it is comfortable there
waiting for true love
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-10-25 08:41 PM

(smiles) Oh Karen, this is sooooooo beautiful, your dreams will touch reality and the angels will be singing the day your heart embraces love, as we will all be cheering in delight! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2001-10-25 08:44 PM

Startime,

From one who has been there twice, I am feeling your words and emotions along with you as I read. Thanks for sharing.

Dawn

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-10-25 08:51 PM

Humm, does the writer know of whom you speak? If not all the men of Passions will be wondering,.....*giggle*...let them!
Good writing here Karen.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-10-25 09:01 PM

Beautiful write Karen!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-10-25 09:03 PM

Very pretty, Karen. And I think it is so sad that we can love so fully when we don't get near enough in return. But what can we do, hm? This is beautiful though.
Luv
Sandra

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

9 posted 2001-10-26 01:28 AM

Startime,
When Dreams Touch Reality...

So close! Sweet.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-26-2001).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-10-31 02:58 PM

Startime-
   Sometimes there's a very fine line
   between dreams and reality.
   Enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

11 posted 2001-10-31 03:59 PM

We dream therefore our art.

Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

12 posted 2001-10-31 04:04 PM

ah.............beautiful beautiful flow to this. I loved it.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

13 posted 2001-10-31 04:10 PM

Karen, you put a very soft touch on romance
This is lovely
Liz

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

14 posted 2001-10-31 05:57 PM

Karen
You write of romance and love so exquisitely.
I felt myself being swept away with this piece, thus was the power of your words.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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