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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada 
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fold me, hold me like a dove kiss me, miss me when I'm near touch me, touch me while I live Don't wait until I die, my love gently, softly like a prayer tuck me, send me hold my hand call me, hear me from above Defend me when I fall, my love Kevin |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
Kevin, your words ring true. waiting to tell someone we love, until after they die, is the worst loss we can endure. Loved your poem! *~*~*~*~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ This is tender, touching and lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
If this one doesn't make people think about waiting to tell the one they love that they love them than nothing will. BRAVO!!!!Great writing with a great message.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Kevin, I've always believed in telling people how I feel about them as often as possible. I hate it that one of my friends left for vacation and just before that we had fought and not had time to forgive and forget. I'll never forgive myself if the hands of time take them from me leaving the last words ever spoken between us ones of anger. Dawn |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kevin, you tell'em! So true. Don't let the chance go by to tell the person you love how you feel. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kevin! I love this piece! Love the words, the style....into my library it goes! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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