Open Poetry #16 |
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My dormant love |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It rained last night The door rang and it was you Looking tired of wondering about Finding your way back into my arms My judgement blinded by your sadness I hugged you so hard stirring in me my dormant love With tears we kissed forgetting all past pain Letting our guards down Feeling on this rainy night our love again |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh nice walker |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Judgement like the rain, Pouring tears from cloudy skies, Drenching all again, Stepping from curtains that cries, Moist thoughts and forgotten pain. Gloom |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Reawakened love where hurts are forgotten can be a good thing as the hearts begin to heal. Very well said. There was such tenderness in the embrace of your poem. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maybe luckier to be a dormant love than a door mat love? I enjoyed the read, walker. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhhh, I love this one Walker! ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
I hope to someday live in that dream. *~*~*~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
EXCELLENT!!! BRAVO!!! SUPERB!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Vulnerably beautiful! Brava! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
very very lovely... Look into the eyes of a man and |
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