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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-10-24 09:37 PM





Children

kaleidoscoping
revolving awesome rainbows
perspicaciously

semiprecious sighs
diamonds in nature’s rough
tumbling foliage

joviality
giggling colors to the floor
kaleidoscoping


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© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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2 posted 2001-10-24 09:43 PM




(sigh) Oh, this is so so cute, I love how you describe nature as the children of all beauty's creation! (smiles) Your beautiful words reflect visions so beautifully! More, more!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-10-24 09:52 PM


Oh how absolutely wonderful. I love this.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-10-24 10:00 PM


Beautiful!!  Enjoyed and enjoyed again!  ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2001-10-24 10:04 PM


Lovely just like the leaves    Thank you for this one.

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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