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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
As I look deep within your eyes thoughts so deep I can only surmise Depths so liquid I could surely drown as oceans troughs or endless sound For in the swirls of gentle see boils out words for only me In gentle hold, I do claim as I whisper out your name And in love’s mist, I will find a trail or two of hidden sign No one would know of what they see for they were left by you for me So gentle touch and lift of chin to see the eyes of tender begin For you know from what you see the return comes back from the depths of me Sets of eyes in long embrace weave a story with loving grace . . . To walk the past, is to embrace the future |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the eyes are the windows of our souls and will show us the truth of love that burns in the one we adore. This is a poem filled with love. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is beautiful, and I wish I had written it... but I didn't so I shall have to place it in my library... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
The eyes say it all... lovely Logan Maree |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
No one would know of what they see for they were left by you for me So gentle touch and lift of chin to see the eyes of tender begin For you know from what you see the return comes back from the depths of me Sets of eyes in long embrace weave a story with loving grace . . . To walk the past, is to embrace the future ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Logan, this is the most romantic piece I have seen you do...I think.... could be others, but for the moment....it is this one! Look into my eyes and tell me what you see. ~NancyLee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sounds like a loving gaze there. Lovely, romantic write If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
big smiles yuh! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So gentle touch and lift of chin to see the eyes of tender begin For you know from what you see the return comes back from the depths of me Sets of eyes in long embrace weave a story with loving grace. ====================================== *SIGH* (hehehe) thats two nights in a row I get to say youre a romantic fool  my goodness it must be nice to be so well inspired... someone has a lucky and lovely muse You keep this up and we are all gonna be swoonin around here  This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan-- "No one would know of what they see for they were left by you for me" when two look with eyes of love...it is a language that transcends time and distance..your poem is full of such, and therefore beauty touched. |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Logan, A very lovely poem of love. Red |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I missed this lovely poem and it was so romantic too |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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