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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-24 09:02 PM



Oh God I feel like I might die
although its never that easy
I have to live and feel the pain
loves abandonment, so sleazy

How did this happen once again
despite my valient efforts true
I guess theres nothing left to try
I've done everything I can do

I feel the pain and try to live
I know there's someway I will still
carry on with  this fruitless search
and maybe someday come to fill

But God it hurts so very much
how do you keep from giving up
there is a way, I will find it
someday my love will be enough.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 10-24-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-24 09:13 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, my heart cries out to your tears, but I know deep down you will find the most beautiful love your sweet loving heart could ever ask for, and it will last eternally! (sigh) My heart cries out to your pain, for I too desire love ever so much and my heart always cries with pain! (kiss on cheek) Beautiful writing, sweet Sandra! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-24 09:26 PM


Oh, dear one, my heart goes out to you. I know this pain that you feel for I too have been there. You have done all you can and now must wait for him to do what he can. I pray you get your hearts desire so that joy can again fill you. ***BIG HUGS***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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3 posted 2001-10-24 09:27 PM




Such pain....

I hope you'd find a way out of it soon...sweet lady.

I really hope so.......My heart goes out with you...

take care....
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[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 10-24-2001).]

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-10-24 09:30 PM


Ah sweetie, my heart is truly aching for you. I know this pain so well. Check your e-mail, I've said more there. *Big hugs*

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmartChick
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5 posted 2001-10-24 10:21 PM


I know this pain very well. Sometimes, I think it is better not to love, than to love and be hurt.
The Lady of Shallot
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6 posted 2001-10-24 10:33 PM


Sandra...oh, honey, I wish I could think of something to say here....this really got to me.  I KNOW the feeling of this.  The pain you speak of is very deep within isn't it?
Loss...sadness...guilt, wondering if you did enough or did too much.

If I could think of one thing to say and it seems so inadequate, it would be never, ever measure your own sweet self against any one else's rejection of you. Don't do it.

I've read a lot of your poetry, you are a wonderful person with a heart of gold.

That's more than enough for a man, believe me....

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Sven
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7 posted 2001-10-24 10:53 PM


you said it yourself. . . there is a way. . .you'll find it. . . it's closer than you think. . .

let the pain flow out my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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