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It may rain tonight
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It may rain tonight |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It may rain tonight and I can't help but wonder where you are Out there in the world when you should be here with me Separated from love living without me I wish you were here loving me dear With your kisses telling me how much you've missed me forgetting our differences mending our love It may rain tonight and it breaks my heart not knowing where you'll sleep tonight [This message has been edited by walker (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn, walker...you're breaking MY heart. Very effective write! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
It may rain tonight and I can't help but wonder where you are -------------- Are you near ......or far? further than a distant star ....where you are? A very lovely piece...... I enjoyed it... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I hope she brings the sunshine back into your life! Best Wishes Always |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very good expression of such upsetting emotions, walker...great write... sp  And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, my heart cries out to you and the sorrow you feel! (sad sigh) This poem broke my heart reading, and I pray with all my heart that you may find her again and feel the comfort knowing she's safe with you forever. (sigh) My heart is with you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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