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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-24 11:59 AM


In the draw of each new breath
you colour your heart with an ardent
longing of abundant blue

allow the soft pink of my touch
to lighten this shade of sadness

the white caress of my whispered breath
to soothe your yearnings

and the heat of a kiss to blend my reds
with you in a passion ripe with deep purple


achildsheart
10-24-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
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1 posted 2001-10-24 12:01 PM


Annie, I saw these colours, very nice!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Amused Cupid
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2 posted 2001-10-24 12:06 PM


I enjoyed your poem, it was very intense with hues of meaning.
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-10-24 03:58 PM


quite a pallette there
rich vibrant colors are used
passion in royal


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-24-2001).]

walker
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4 posted 2001-10-24 05:54 PM


Very sensual, great poem.
Duncan
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5 posted 2001-10-24 06:45 PM


From healing to hot, you wrote them all.  Liked this alot.
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2001-10-24 07:15 PM




Very nice colours indeed....

I simply love your palette.....

Thank You
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Magnus
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7 posted 2001-10-24 07:19 PM


Excellent,  only nice critiques of this
vivid poem.  I love the colors and the
way you have made this so colorful.

This speaks so well of love.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 10-24-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-10-24 07:41 PM




(big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful and sensual, sweet Annie! Love indeed lights the heart with joy and the colors dance in the sunrise of each loving breath! (smiles) BRAVO SWEET FRIEND!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Naoh Eaton

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