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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
In the draw of each new breath you colour your heart with an ardent longing of abundant blue allow the soft pink of my touch to lighten this shade of sadness the white caress of my whispered breath to soothe your yearnings and the heat of a kiss to blend my reds with you in a passion ripe with deep purple achildsheart 10-24-01 Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Annie, I saw these colours, very nice! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Amused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 40 |
I enjoyed your poem, it was very intense with hues of meaning. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
quite a pallette there rich vibrant colors are used passion in royal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very sensual, great poem. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
From healing to hot, you wrote them all. Liked this alot. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Very nice colours indeed.... I simply love your palette.....  Thank You ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent, only nice critiques of this vivid poem. I love the colors and the way you have made this so colorful. This speaks so well of love. [This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful and sensual, sweet Annie! Love indeed lights the heart with joy and the colors dance in the sunrise of each loving breath! (smiles) BRAVO SWEET FRIEND!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Naoh Eaton |
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