Open Poetry #16 |
I'm Car Shopping....Part 1.......SUV's |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Gee…MC Jimmy said As he set the records spinning Look at the crowd in the house And the night is just beginning MC Jimmy worked clubs in Tahoe Most famous for his blazer All the folks from the suburban streets Said he wasn’t the sharpest laser But his jacket was so wild It escaladed tension And all the dancers writhed so much It was worthy of a mention That night they took ole Jimmy His passport had expired His expedition now was over He couldn’t escape for he was tired The records still are spinning Jimmy gained his liberty From the sequoia living azteks Who like music just like me Can you afford excursions Deep into the sacred woods You will hear the hummers Who can’t sing his songs so good In the still of a hopping night From here to the Yukon valley You can here Jimmy spinning A mix of “Long Tall Sally” ---- Ok pick out all the SUV's you can! and uh oh don't worry there will be more types of cars in the following installments! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good job Walt..hope the interest rate is 0%..like it is here in Amarillo till the end of the month... ~Victoria~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
O yuh that it is and that's why I am diggin out the dough here in Ft Worth! |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I think there are mor SUV's than cars now. The Beamer of the '00's. That is supposed to be two zeros, but it looks like me after three espressos. I like your poem and SUV's. If an expedition is longer than an excursion, why is an Excursion longer than and Expedition? Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Amused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 40 |
Awesome poem you have penned here I doubt I caugt all the SUV's seems there are more of them these days springing up everywhere. Just wish I knew where all the money is to buy them...LOL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Walt, Now, I counted 10, but then again I am not really up on vehicles. I liked this. Makes me kinda wish that my hubby still had his Jeep...covered in mud from finding trails in parts unkown.......hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Creative Walt writes another cute poem! I have a chevy blazer, I love it! [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cool write Walt! OH YUH! ~chuckles and hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
A few more than ten o yuh hehehe thanks all for reading |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
i see 13 (unless liberty is one, then it's 14) hummer's tha best, though. eye like it a lot! sorry so late on the reply but i just had to prop it up... |
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