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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-24 09:45 AM


While sitting here thinking about you
And how much love we use to share
Many times I wander what I did do
That made you no longer even care

It breaks my heart as we drift apart
My love for you will always be there
Like it was when you and I first met
Silently I cry so many, many tears

I long to have you hold me in your arms
It is with you I want to spend an eternity
Even if it has to be always on this farm
It is you who, I love so much you see

Each and everyday, you are on my mind
Always missing you, all through the day
Look into my heart and you will find
My love for you is here to always stay

© By Sue 10/23/01


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-10-24 09:55 AM


Sue,
If this doesn't stir up a hornets nest nothing will. Enjoyed

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-10-24 09:56 AM


*sigh* my heart goes out to you. It is so hard when we don't know all the answers but you need to remember that it may not be something you have done but something inside of them. I pray the pain does not make you suffer long.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
USA
3 posted 2001-10-24 11:32 AM


losing someone is not as bad as leaving them for their own good.....how sad....

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
4 posted 2001-10-25 04:05 PM


So pure your love, well expressed.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-10-25 04:14 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2001-10-26 07:41 PM


Sending Hugs, this feels so sad..like me.
Sandra

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