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Startime
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0 posted 2001-10-24 09:01 AM


I Would If I Could

I would if I could
touch your eyes
with soft lips
kissing them
closed

I would if I could
touch your lips
with finger tips
tracing them
gently

I would if I could
touch your heart
with softness
given from
my heart

I would if I could
touch your soul
with sweetness
from spirit
freely

I would if I could
touch you now
with passion
heat wrapped
flowing

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-10-24 09:06 AM


awww....this is wonderful.....I like the would if I coulds very much  
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-10-24 09:08 AM


Karen,
But you do, every word. *L*

vandana
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3 posted 2001-10-24 10:48 AM


enjoy
SmartChick
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4 posted 2001-10-24 10:50 AM


This is very good. I like it.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-10-24 03:47 PM


Oh yes how many time have I thought these same words...I would if I could...James
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6 posted 2001-10-24 03:48 PM


Startime...you are writing so beautifully.
I am impressed.. This is superbly said.
Couldn't we all,  if only we could.

Enchantress
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7 posted 2001-10-24 03:49 PM


Very nice Karen!

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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