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Twinkling Star
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Twinkling Star |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
 Worlds of toxic dying races Weeping tears from their faces Worlds of plenty, the happy ones Pass the richness to their sons Worlds so lonely they are lost Seeking love at any cost A comet passes sprinkling dust The particles of magical lust Worlds content and feel the love Some so bright in the sky above Galaxies merge together Exchanging worlds now and forever Black holes will suck you in Time is missing on a world of sin Planet Earth a place, a home A world of protection under a dome The void of space a place where we are A harsh environment of emotions far Look in the sky, look in the past Worlds have collided but will we last Supernova has arrived So far apart but we survived In the darkest edges of space Just a memory of your face In my heart you will stay A void so empty every day Searching worlds where you may be In a mission of love called you and me Could it be you that twinkling star As I look to the sky so vast and far |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"In the darkest edges of space Just a memory of your face In my heart you will stay A void so empty every day Searching worlds where you may be In a mission of love called you and me Could it be you that twinkling star As I look to the sky so vast and far" Insect~ I love this, it's so beautiful  am keeping this one  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very, very nice, insect. And the pun is intentional. (I'm the nature bird who likes bugs.) And I definitely like this exploration into space, time, and love. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful read this one was. Loads of emotional impact and the cadence was a pleasure to read. It reads so well and so powerfully when read aloud. Bravo for an exquisite read and remember, if the star is one you can see in your heart, then it is very much obtainable. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*********I really enjoyed this*********** |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Lois I’ll meet you in the dark room and we’ll see what develops? Midnitesun Nothing compares to the birds and the bees or the stars! Thanks for your response Mark Bohannan A pumping heart is like a pulsating star! Thank you for your wonderful reply RosePetal I see infinite stars in the morning dew on a rosepetal! Thank you for responding |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am so there  |
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