Open Poetry #16 |
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Touched |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Until you touched me I had never been touched The way you touched me When you loved me Now I wonder Will I ever be the same |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alan, I don't think so. Enjoyed |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Seymour..I must agree.once touched there is no turning back..thanks for reading and replying |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Aw, this is so sweet! (sigh) Things will never be the same again, for love changes everything deep down in the heart. (smiles) May this sweet love forever flourish in your heart, sweet friend! (sigh) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sounds like love has come to you. Great write, wonderful read. I love to read when people fall in love. ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nope. Spoiled rotten. Can tell. Never the same again! Enjoyed the write! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Noah my friend.love does change you sometimes to the good, sometimes to the bad. Just got to go with the flow. Startime..Love has not nor am I looking..I have just decided to try to love myself...thanks for reading Sunshine...thanks for reading...isn't it funny how love can spoil someone... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You've got it Alan. You have to love yourself first....then all of a sudden WHAM....she touches you and you are never the same. Good write in just a few words. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it is an awesome feeling to be touched by someone and to know, you will never be the same....this is fantastic Alan.... ![]() ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alan, I know that once we have been touched in that special way, we are never the same. Love is wonderful and painful both at times. LOVED THIS On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sweet. Sounds like you are in love. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice ![]() |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh yeah. That's love my friend. Deb ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey alan! ![]() love is an awesome thing...and love will change you wether you know it or not..and love will have you when you are ready, not before... ![]() ![]() hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Alan- This is lovley. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Alan, very powerful is so few words. Well done. If this is about loving yourself, forgive your self first. that is a start. Good Luck. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Something we all wonder at one point in our lives...but you expressed it very well, Alan...great write... sp ![]() And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Touch is all it takes to make us whole. When you can touch your own heart and feel good, you will be ready to touch and be touched again. I understand, as I've only recently allowed myself that loving personal touch, having sworn off all relationships after the last one failed. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
People say I'm touched in the head. Oh, that's not the kind of touching you're talking about!!! LOL. Seriously, nice write If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loving thyself seems like a vey good choice, Alan. hugssss ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." |
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