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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
May I back up a bit and tell you it makes me smile when I’ve had a long day to come home and find your name among my mail Not a big deal in the course of these things but enough I think to mention I do appreciate your attention |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, You offer good fuzzies for the warm ones received. Good plan! Nice poem. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In the big scheme of things, it is knowing we have friends that can make us smile and show us that they care. This was so sweet because it mattered enough for the person to leave their name in your mailbox and that you cared enough to tell them so. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Be careful with that snail mail these days, best to stick to email. Are you ready for the spam after this post???? Just kidding. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I think I know this feeling...yes, I do know this feeling. You sure know how to make a girl smile first thing in the morning!  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How nice to hear that from a man. Good for you for telling her. Sandra |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh i feel the same for gratitude to others |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No bills, no statements no coupons or sales just a nice safe greeting in the U. S. Mail |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Doesn't it feel great to know someone cares about us? I am glad you decided to tell her. Absolutely wonderful poem that each of us can relate to. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-24-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
warm and fuzzy blanket you write Duncan. Well done! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sweet. I just love it. And I bet she does too. |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
*SMILE* Very nice. It is the little things that makes us feel loved more than anything. Never let that go. A wonderfully simple poem filled with meaning. Great piece. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Know why I like reading your poetry? It speaks in everyday language without being flowery but still....has that underlying tone of poetics that makes it stay with you. Enjoyed. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Your name , your attention, I appeciated your attention  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh....I know the feeling certainly and you have expressed it so well... your name in my email and I'm waiting to hear your tale a simple greeting a wish A warm smile coming to me through the miles.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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