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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-23 04:54 PM



Softly…we breathe

lying in the comfort of
consumed passion

tickling traces with
weightless fingertips float
over moistened skin

the escape of one last
sigh before drifting off to yet
another dream

achildsheart
10-23-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-23 04:59 PM


*sigh*...oh yes....lovely thoughts here. Must just remember to breathe.     Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-23 07:31 PM


WOW!!!Now this warm little poem leaves me with a yearning to breathe softly. I LOVE IT!!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-10-23 07:45 PM




(sigh) Oh Annie, this is so so romantic! I bet your love sighs deeply every time you read this to him! (smiles) Soooooo sweet and tender this expression of love is! I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-10-24 12:52 PM


Gotta love going off to dream like this.
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5 posted 2001-10-24 02:38 AM


And you were the last I read, and I leave here tonight with a sigh in my heart, and hopefully off to wonderful dreams.  This was lovely.

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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