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Finally, Love!
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Finally, Love! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Finally, Love! By Larry Chadwick It’s in those dreams it comes to mind, Those thoughts that bring me to your door. Where I pause again before I go thru, Longing to fulfill my dreams and more. But one more time I stop and hesitate, Hoping you’ve been longing as well. The anticipation, it’s been killing me, What this evening brings, time will tell. I enter in and find you there, The world we’ve left behind. And always it has been this way, You are all that’s on my mind. The glow of the fireplace so soft, Matching the feelings that we share. Snuggled close in your arms so warm, Now I know anything I can bare. Your lips so tender and eyes so deep, This gentle lady who’s always kind. Brushing your cheek, caressing your hair, Sensual thoughts race through my mind. Filled with passions so rich, they’re mine, Completing the love that we share. Overwhelmed that the time has come, We’ll make love all night, right there. [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
After I catch my breath, I might be able to do more than pant. Like nothing I've read from you before. A love song.   |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Midnitesun, This is a passions site, write? It's the part of poetry that attracted way back when...I was 20 something. Failed pathetically! So 30 years later this is my first attempt. So since it's my first time be gentle. Which is more than you got from the goose. ROTFLMAO |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OK. I'll be gentle, I'll be kind. I love love poems, so I don't mind if you cover the page 'till I'm in a stage of passionate rage while still sitting here on my chair hugging the air. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Midnitesun It is pretty tough, This internet stuff. One poet right here, And the other who knows where. So we revert back to the dreams, It's a handy little scheme. You simply pick a place to meet, And who you're going to greet. Because in fantasy land it's fair, To be with who you chose there. It's the rest of that sweet stuff, Of which we hardly ever hear enough. Sweet Dreams! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
God, am I going to have some dreams tonight. Funny, I have nothing funny to say. And sometimes I write love songs, but usually keep them in my private journal. I'm about ready to open up that journal. *sigh* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your writing Larry...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* beautifully written. Your heart skips a beat as you write words filled with yearning and anticipation. Well done. This poem does not bring the same kind of smile as your others for this poem is written to touch the tender heart bringing a smile of yearning to that heart as well. . BRAVO!!! I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh Larry, This is wonderful...had to catch my breath there for a minute! You know I love this one!  it's a goody!  Love ya Cindi |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Midnitesun, 30 years since I attempted this. It's tough. Not sure I have the courage to try again.  James, At least I tried. Thanks.  Startime, How right you are. Sensual but frightening. I'm losing my courage already.  Cindi, Hmmmmmm!  Okay now, about them childhood tales...  [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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