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Open Poetry #16

Thinking About Him

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-23 12:01 PM

If I could be as good as you
Maybe, then, you'd want me too
This love I feel inside, is true
To you it can't be anything new

So much love I have inside
This love I just cannot hide
Memories of you in my mind
Of all the things we did confide

Words of love you gave to me
Love you made me feel you see
Said you always wanted to be
Together with me for eternity

Too many years have gone past
Nothing you gave ever did last
It all seemed to have gone real fast
All of the love to me you did cast

My love for you is always there
To give to you with so much care
If only your time you would spare
I'd take away all of your dispair
© By Sue 10/21/01

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (edited 10-23-2001).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-10-23 12:10 PM

*sigh*, this is a familiar tune. Yes, I remember it well. I could have written it myself. Actually, I did write many like it, still do and won't admit how long it's been

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2001-10-23 12:40 PM

Sue,
No doubt where your heart is! Nice sentiments.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-10-23 12:51 PM

It's good that you don't hide your feelings of love. It's what the whole world needs now, as that old song goes. And I'll bet it feels good to write it out too.

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