Open Poetry #16 |
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The Marriage of The Myths....Bronte 10 Finale |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee ![]() |
As A man would, that loved such a Woman Desiring her hand, he bowed to knee In most human form, rendering his reasons That she was the one He needed, Indeed “Yes...You are the Thunder Bronte! I am the Lightening..Light Unborn Without your rapport of admonition A deity as your Mother before you” “She the Goddess Brighid of Ireland’s Lore And your Father Helius..Her secret Lover Sired the child that rolls across the lineage of Gods & Goddesses eternally” “I have waited milleniums of lonely time Just outside the darkest part of your heart To Join your Storming Brew of Passion’s Cry To Melt with You as Lovers do, in Fusion” “I am Master of craft, skill, and light Of that which stands the test of time But what Stir in Heart of Hearts have I Without the Wildness of your Raging Spirit?” “There is no other Bronte..capable of my muse Your quiet darkness, Equally sets the stage I am Rapt by your Thunderous Presence Enamoured in the beauty of your Racing Grace” “Take my hand.. My Bronte..My Bride of Night We shall meet at the clap of your thunder and Wed this fortnight in fullness searing In coming Luna as no other lovers will do” “We shall dance in the mist forever..twilight We shall draw the curtain together perpetually Bursting forth in the Morn's intensive embrace Proposing eternal ecstacy in Lover’s Sleepy Eyes” With a Yes of her breath she reached for him She as the Thunder, He as the Light, Acceptance Blazed an implosion, arcing in the static touch She Drew into him, eclipsing, pearling black Lustering in Onyx rhapsody, horizoning his soul He embraced her, bursting heavenward, exploding In A blast of fulmination and bolting bliss In crescendo of kiss...Embers Showered the Earth Mr. Fetherall stood in the street sobbing Basking in the glorious sight of nuptial love His task was done...He’d kept his promise Unfurling his wings..he flew to join her Mother Proudly...On the other side...........
[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() STANDING OVATION!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! OH MY GOSH, WHAT THE MOST PERFECT WAY TO BE EMBRACED!!! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! Everything just blew me away!!! “Take my hand.. My Bronte..My Bride of Night We shall meet at the clap of your thunder and Wed this fortnight in fullness searing In coming Luna as no other lovers will do” “We shall dance in the mist forever..twilight We shall draw the curtain together perpetually Bursting forth in the Morn's intensive embrace Proposing eternal ecstacy in Lover’s Sleepy Eyes” That was my favorite part of all! Oh Regina, you just amaze me with your marvelous words!!! (throws roses on stage) We all love you so much, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Applause, applause. Such a lovely romantic ending. I love good endings. This has indeed been a beautiful series. You have done it very well indeed. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Regina, Your zestful expression played host to a wealth of passion in each storied act. Lovely, intriguing work...thanks for sharing your gift. Willie B |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bravo! A very worthy finish to what has been a very interesting and thoughtful series... Remarkably told.... by a remarkable talent. Now... I wait to see what comes from the corners of your mind next... what turn will be taken and what will haunt your thoughts |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'd also like to render a thanks to Mr. Fetherall, for his unending assistance to the characters. Regina, I hope that your Muse is quite pleased with this, and I do hope that she, or one of her sisters, visits you again for another series.... because I know it is in you to birth them.... Thank you for this! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and now we receive the perfect ending of this wonderful journey you have taken us on and I find myself wanting much more of this kind of work from you. You weave magic with your pen as it moves across the page bringing visions to life. BRAVO!!! I love it. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
One word Sis, ENCORE!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!! When is the publication!!!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful series of poems. I promise that I did read them all and though I was not able to reply to them all, I much enjoyed each and every one of them. Bravo for sure and what a wonderful way to pay tribute to your source of inspiration. Your poems always leave the reader with a sense of growth and a feeling that our journey is just beginning and I love that about your works. Applause , ovations, whistles of approval and all that jazz. Well done. I have found in you ... a reflection of me ... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RWood~ Ahhhhhhhhh, that Mr. Fetherall ... ![]() just so appropriately identified~ Wonderfully spirited series. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Great imagination Regina....very well done. No wonder everyone is sad.....A sequel maybe? |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
all I can say is. . . I'm glad that you did this. . . it's wonderful. . .your muse spoke. . . and you listened. . . keep listening. . . I'm sure that there's more. . . beautiful Regina. . . just beautiful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Noah: I shall cling to the memory of your roses forever...however no stage would be present without you...and all that helped this to happen. "You equally set the stage" Love and hugs! Thank You ![]() Tracey: I'm thrilled you approved! Thank you forever for staying with me through this. Hugs! Willie: I'm so happy I could share it with you. I really do want to spread the wealth. It means so much to me that you felt that! Hugs! Cpat: I just hope it's not the boogy man! Be careful what you wish for!!! ![]() Sunshine: Mr. Fetherall Thanks you! And maybe...when Bronte rests a bit...she will thunder through my thoughts once again. I'm so grateful, talent such as yourself, would want me to render anything! Hugs! Karen: I'm afraid she did change me..as if she is real...does that mean I'm loony? I like to think she adds to me..or I borrow from her something very special. I am grateful to be able to share with you. Thank you for allowing me to! Hugs! Donna: You are my constant cheerful voice of inspiration!!! Don't know about publication...she is sort of precious to me...I tend to share with only the special ones!!!Besides...I would need lots of practice..this is my window of opportunity if but for just one reader such as yourself! Love and Hugs! Somy~ Mark: I got a mental picture...one with the whistles, ovations, and applause, with me looking for the one they were so receptive to! For Bronte...I am proud...for you to say such wonderful things...I am thrilled! Hugs!!! Marge: MMMMaaaarrgge Of my heart..thank you!!! He was the greatest leading supportive actor...So glad you approved!! Hugs! Magnus: AAAwwwww...You are so lovely to me...I Don't want anyone to be sad...Sequel?? Hmmmm...Can you hear the wheels turning in my head? Thank you dear Poet! Sven: I'm so glad for friends like you! You lifted my wings in this from the get go! I owe the "Discovery" to you! Bronte may never have been born if not for your wonderful Goddess series....and the light you provided in the path! All along...you said go..so I went...and I hope I made you proud. ![]() You all make me very proud to be a part of this family. I can't imagine what part of me would lose the most for never having entered this forum, my heart, or my mind...for you all are so giving in both areas. I salute the power of verse and voice in this very loving place. Sincerely, Regina |
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