Open Poetry #16 |
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For Cricket |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet ![]() |
You came to us a little ball of malnutrition and mistreatment We wrapped you in love and blankets a searched your grateful eyes for hope We watched you get stronger We watched your steps gain bounce And we watched each other for the smiles we all wanted to show For three weeks we took turns spending our waking hours making you feel happy and loved And then one day you were gone... And all that was left of you was the echo of your sratchy meow in my mind Leaving me with only one comfort that you discovered love and warmth in our family and your last hours were spent immersed in it In loving memory of Cricket, the sweetest kitten ever to grace my world. * I tried several approaches to be able to post a picture with this but was unable to as my servers wouldn't allow that sort of thing I guess....any suggestions? * [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-23-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how very touching making me tear up here...... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
SEA~ Thank you for feeling this so deeply. It's taken me awhile to be able to post this. Hugs, ~Krista [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-22-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh how very sad and touching Krista but also a beautiful, sincere poem of a gentle time of shared love and kindness. take care jm Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awwwe this is so precious and so sad...my heart grieves for your loss~ |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
This was very sweet and sad. I read it because of the title. My nickname throughout grade school and high school was cricket. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very heartwarming yet sad write. Well done. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
JM~ Thank you Janet, your words always warm my heart. ButterfliesDon'tCry~ He was such a precious little guy. Thank you for your sweet words of comfort. Lisann~ He was given the name Cricket after Jimminey Cricket from Pinnochio because he was so tiny and also to compliment our other cat named Figaro (black and white). How did you get the name? Thanks for stopping by Lisann aka Cricket ![]() Enchantress~ Thank you for your kindness. Hugs to all of you! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow this reminded me of Cali, my cat that I miss more than I can tell you, so yes, I know exactly how you are grieving, as I am not over loosing her yet. They say the best thing is to go out and get another one. Great big huge hugs, and I know exactly how you are feeling, and I am so sorry for your loss. ~* A smile is just a frown turned upside down *~ |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I am sorry for your loss... I have experienced this same thing several times and each hurts as much as the first... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Mysteria~ He was our "go out and get another one" cat ![]() Thank you for your words of comfort...I'm sure you will always remember Cali and I'm sure I will always remember Cricket...even though he was only with us for such a short while. Cpat Hair~ Yes, it's true. Thank you for stopping by, it's nice to be seeing your name here again. Hugs to you both ![]() |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
Smitten~~~~ I got the name cricket because I can make the chirping noise that a cricket makes. I use to do it all the time in class just to tick off the teachers. YEah I know, it was mean and childish but hey I was a mean and childish kid. Of course, if I knew back then what it meant when a cricket makes that noise I probably wouldn't have done it. The chirping is the female cricket in heat. |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I am so sorry for your loss. You've written your grief well - and also reminded us that it's not the length of time a friend has graced our life that matters but the depth they've touched our hearts. ![]() |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Lisann~ Wow, that's quite the talent you've got there ![]() Thanks again for stopping by. *hugs* illusion~ thank you...that is a very profound and kind thing you said. I agree whole-heartedly. *hugs* |
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