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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-22 05:31 PM



The Voice of His Soul…

On a footbridge
with moss covered rails
her figure, in a long black cap,
crosses a tree laden river

engulfed in a forest, where only
hints of light peek through, a whispered
voice calls to her in the gentle
rustling of the leaves…

in the cascade
of the water below

she comes here…everyday,
closing her eyes, she draws the
voice to her heart, and there his soul
is able to breathe


All my love…..Annie
achildsheart
10-22-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-10-22 06:20 PM


Very lovely, Annie.
Sandra

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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-10-22 06:29 PM


Whisper's,
Well done, I enjoyed the read

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-10-22 06:46 PM


What a nice place to breathe

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2001-10-22 10:08 PM




(big hugggssssss) Such a beautiful touching poem that whispers with a voice of pure love! (smiles) You are a very special person to us all, sweet Annie! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Gaia
5 posted 2001-10-22 11:14 PM


And his whispered voice is a sweet caress.

"engulfed in a forest, where only
hints of light peek through, a whispered
voice calls to her in the gentle
rustling of the leaves…"


cpalmer
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6 posted 2001-10-23 12:09 PM


Way to go! This is awesome!
Cindi

CocoBaci
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7 posted 2001-10-23 01:21 AM


psssssst... this poem is exquisite...
Hugs2UpoetFriend
*~coco~*

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
8 posted 2001-10-23 04:55 PM


everyone, thank you.
I am so happy you all liked this.

Interloper,  I am touched, thank you.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

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