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Dee
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since 2000-08-19

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Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-18 07:55 AM

Secret Lover - A duet written with my icq buddy, Rob. (who claims NOT to be a poet, by the way)

His heart is his gift to her,
it sits there upon his sleeve.
He could give the world to her
if only she would believe.

She doesn’t have to say it
and he often wonders why
she can tell him she loves him
with just the wink of her eye.

He’s cradled her soul,
touched her heart somehow
and made her dreams
so much sweeter now.

What is it she sees in him?
Showing him off to her friends.
He's no more than other men,
smiling he wonders again

She knows how much he loves her
though she’s his secret lover.
She dreams about their future,
the day they’ll be together.

Wanting to hold her so tight
and make love to her just right.
Only one thing left to fight,
when it’s her day it’s his night

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

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1 posted 2001-10-18 08:32 AM

Passion abounds, in this rhyme's "hidden" charm!

Willie B

Mistletoe Angel

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2 posted 2001-10-18 08:40 AM

(smiles) Oh Dee, this is so so beautiful and lovely! (smiles) This poem made em cry in the affection and sincerity it has for dear lovers. (big hugggssssss) Your words are timelessly beautiful always! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dee, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dee
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3 posted 2001-10-18 08:43 AM

Willie, thank you. This one is pretty special to me so I am glad you liked it.

Noah, thank you for your sweet words they make me feel wonderful. And so does that kiss on the cheek

Dee

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Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-10-18 09:11 AM

Wanting to hold her so tight
and make love to her just right.
Only one thing left to fight,
when it’s her day it’s his night
=======================================

Tell Rob I said hes a poet

cadence kissed gem of heart here Dee-girlie
those last two lines tug at the heart...
Best of luck to the both of you..
it makes me smile to see you happy and inspired

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2001-10-18 09:16 AM

nice reading o yuh you two keep at it!

Dee
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6 posted 2001-10-18 09:17 AM

Hey, have I missed you around here, Janet

I agree, Rob is a poet, and he is a wonderful guy too. And yes he does inspire. Thanks for taking the time to read our humble post.

Dee

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Dee
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7 posted 2001-10-18 09:19 AM

Hey Walt, where did you come from?

Yes, we will keep at it.

Dee

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HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2001-10-18 09:24 AM

Yes beautifully expressed and a poem that many in online relationships can relate to
Hope
P.S it is not a Rob from Gosford by any chance ??

Dee
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9 posted 2001-10-18 09:26 AM

Hope, it is sad in a way that many can relate. The distance of an online relationship can be hard.
As for Rob from Gosford...are you gonna introduce me?

Dee

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[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-18-2001).]

Startime
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Canada

10 posted 2001-10-18 09:27 AM

*sigh* what a combination. This is beautiful both in the words and in how the feelings of both of you are expressed. I LOVE IT!!!! Love and romance is certainly flowing from both of your pens.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dee
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11 posted 2001-10-18 09:33 AM

Startime, I am glad you enjoyed this. It is very special to me.

Dee

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Dee
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12 posted 2001-10-18 09:34 AM

I loved writing this with Rob and even though he can't reply (as he isn't a member) I want to tell him something.
Rob, thank you for humouring me and giving this a go. I loved writing this with you and hope we can do it again soon. Thank you sweetheart.

Dee

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SEA

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with you

13 posted 2001-10-18 10:12 AM

Dee and Rob (who is a poet), this is beautiful, and touches the heart softly

very well done you two!

Dee
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14 posted 2001-10-18 10:16 AM

Thanks Susan, it is so cool to be able to write with someone (now I have been shown how

)

Dee

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

15 posted 2001-10-18 10:34 AM

This is a wonderful poem. Looks to me like he is a good poet. You both are.

Dee
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16 posted 2001-10-18 10:38 AM

Thanks Smart Chick, you have put a smile on my face tonight.

Dee

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Parker
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17 posted 2001-10-18 11:13 AM

Dee/Rob,

Very nice duet. The flow is very natural and don't I understand this.

Parker

Dee
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18 posted 2001-10-18 11:24 AM

Thanks Parker. Sometimes it isn't the best feeling, other times it is the most wonderful thing in the world.
Take care anam cara.

Dee

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Auguste

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By the sea

19 posted 2001-10-18 11:40 AM

Nice work, Dee. You two write well together.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

20 posted 2001-10-18 11:52 AM

His heart is his gift to her,
it sits there upon his sleeve.
He could give the world to her
if only she would believe.

--------------------
Brava..!!
A certainly wonderful lovely piece written by wonderful poets....Oh, yes...Rob is certainly a poet too.

Thank you
*****************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA

21 posted 2001-10-18 12:03 PM

Well, you are both great poets!

This is wonderful, so lovely

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

22 posted 2001-10-18 12:07 PM

Dee~ & Rob~
Lovely cadenced dance of pens~
Very enjoyable~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

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Green Mountains of VT

23 posted 2001-10-18 01:14 PM

A most heartfelt piece. Rob should be proud to be a part of it. Time will have more to share no doubt. Distance is a trial by all.

Balladeer

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24 posted 2001-10-18 03:29 PM

Allthough I have a strong distrust for a man named after a criminal act

, you two compliment each other very nicely. Big congrats to you both

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

25 posted 2001-10-18 03:37 PM

Oh lol...I just got what Balladeer said!
Dee and Rob...you make beautiful music together!!
Keep it up!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Dee
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26 posted 2001-10-18 04:32 PM

Michael, thank you. I think rob did pretty good

My Enchanted, I think I would have to agree with you, he is pretty good isn't he

Dee

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Dee
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27 posted 2001-10-18 04:36 PM

Melissa, glad you liked our efforts

Marge, it is always nice to see your name after my poems. I really enjoyed doing this with Rob.

Dee

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Dee
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28 posted 2001-10-18 04:39 PM

ctowen, firstly welcome to Passions. I know you will love it here, everyone does

Thank you for reading our poem.

'Deer, thank you for giving me the opportunity to share this poem with everyone. And the only crime would be if Rob doesn't keep writing.

Dee

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Dee
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29 posted 2001-10-18 04:41 PM

Nancy, yeah 'Deer is a barrel of laughs, isn't he?

Beautiful music...I like that, thank you.

Dee

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Midnitesun

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Gaia

30 posted 2001-10-18 05:04 PM

Your duet is a sweet melody,
and day and night always meet
at sunrise and twilight.

Dee
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31 posted 2001-10-18 05:11 PM

Midnitesun, thank you, that is a wonderful way of looking at it

Dee

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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

32 posted 2001-10-23 04:05 AM

Dee & Rob-
   This is a beautiful write.
   You two make a great team..

   LOL @ Balladeer!

   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

The Lady of Shallot
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USA

33 posted 2001-10-23 07:20 AM

it's wonderful....I'm so happy for you!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Dee
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Queensland, Australia

34 posted 2001-10-23 04:32 PM

Vicky and Lady, thank you both. I am hoping Rob will write with me again soon.

Dee

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