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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-22 05:16 PM



quill scratches paper
candle glow reveals the words
nay, reveals the heart
~*~

Inspired by:  Candling Poetic Peeps

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-10-22 05:22 PM



candlelight flickering
revealing thoughts in twilight
shhh, now, snuff the flame

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2001-10-22 05:22 PM


lovely inspiration....lovely words....  


Greeneyes~


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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-22-2001).]

Martie
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3 posted 2001-10-22 05:28 PM


Lovely inspiration, Inerloper!
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
4 posted 2001-10-22 05:55 PM


in the colder monthes, I love to write by firelight.Just lying on the floor in front of the fire, with pen and paper...

This is very pretty...

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-10-22 06:04 PM


Interloper,
Nice write. Enjoyed

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2001-10-22 06:30 PM


Candlelit beauty here.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-10-22 06:36 PM



Quill scratches paper
Angry chicken screams in pain
"Use a pencil, twit!"

sorry   One of those "devil made me do it"'s  
Startime
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8 posted 2001-10-22 07:45 PM


and the pen reveals words of beauty for us to enjoy. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-10-22 07:48 PM




(big hugggssssss) Such a beautiful haiku of beautiful inspiration! (sigh) You always write such beautiful thoughts in this form, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2001-10-22 07:49 PM


Great revelation.
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2001-10-22 07:55 PM


Nicely done!  I prefer to write by candle light...I look much better.     ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Sven
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12 posted 2001-10-22 08:33 PM


you inspire well. . .

excellent my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-10-23 12:56 PM


InterLoper~
Your inspiration gives such a lift to this lady's heart~
Thank you so very much for your thoughtfulness~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

The Lady of Shallot
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14 posted 2001-10-23 02:49 PM


If you use a pencil make sure it's full of lead  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

rwood
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15 posted 2001-10-24 06:57 PM


A beautiful write..inspired by a beautiful write....the gift goes on. Magical!  

Sincerely,
Regina

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Between the Lines
16 posted 2001-10-24 07:00 PM


I wish
I could express
myself in so few words..
*s
  
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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