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....Nothing Comes....
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....Nothing Comes.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Nothing Comes click questions read of quizzicals from where poets respond in meticulous flair and all around me lexis flows this is how a poet grows click in swirl and twirl, eddying views parlay sounds of voices still unsaved by connecting ink to parchment white dreams run fugitive back to night click in early morning’s murky hush coffee’s hot and in café’d slush I waken opines yet described but soon they play seek, and hide click so I sit in silent pondering as to where my feelings meander, coupling words like puzzled fits, reminiscent of oleander click nothing comes I sit and wonder, if I had picket gates would poetic verse wander in and knock to see my fate, if I were home, seeking thee in the dawning’s wait click soon nothing shall arrive just as my day falls under way no pen to grasp, no paper to mark though thoughts shall play in delighted lark click perhaps my nothings shall find their way to come visit minds in playsome fray casting shadowed reflection to pen’s delight that I might read them in your words this night click |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Your moving words are everything and move me to inspiration! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To me, this has a Shakesperean flow to it. I think it is a great write. You have written this well. There is a lot to ponder within. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karilea, you are our sunshine to us always, and your words are always so gorgeous to read! (smiles) I know that feeling too, where you're not in a writer's block yet you just can't seem to get your thoughts out exactly like you want them to! (big hugggssssss) Your words are always so beautiful and fun to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I'm a bit stuck for inspiration myself right now but do enjoy others who are in the groove. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Well all I can say is your nothing did a great job. Your pen flows across the page and give inspiration to us all. BRAVO!!!!Again your words leave sunshine in the heart.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
WOW this need be read more oft' |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, I'm glad Walt brought this back up. I missed it yesterday. This is really good writing. I love the way you've put the whole thing together. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, I must agree with our friend Walt, this indeed is meant2be re-read and re-read for it truly is a captivating read... Hugs2uAlwaysPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Absolute thunderous *applause* here~ Wonderfully penned~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
That's just how talented you are...you whip up something marvelous from nothing...you have a wealth of offering in your verse! I'll take a gracious portion please. Thank you. Sincerely, Regina |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh please read my words so playsome and frolicking feel lips curl in smile Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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