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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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it is a rubber band, this paradox called life you stretch its neck and the circle expands then you release your grip and it tightens it's hold suddenly all around you is chilly and cold perspective, every wise man has his own, but reality is more than a vision there is a blur that surrounds the ritual of waking up and going somewhere and getting back home to have some rest but, there is no rest, there is no turning away you simply can't unscrew the bolts and expect the frame to hang in its place sedimented you never get somewhere and back it is always somewhere and beyond destination is the horizon, constantly changing like seasons, and reasons. open the latch and let the fresh air come in ah! its that winter air time for coffee reality strikes back no wonder when someone like me decides to write all that comes out is a spiral that winds and unwinds meaninglessly the noise of my sound is commotion but, maybe there is a sense in nonsense too but, I live in a locomotive breath swish-swash, huff-puff, breath in-out, inhale, ex- hale, hail! the ride of my life yet, --------- "locomotive breath", title of a Jethro Tull song. Thanks to Ian Anderson and co. Great musicians. --------- This is just a 2 minute break for coffee between long hours of work. So forgive me if this wasted your time. Thanks again for all your support. "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
A two minute break? Not bad...wish I could write like that on a two minute break...don't work too hard now! Great write...sad in parts but nice! Hugs Cindi |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sudhir, Two mins huh? A poem with this much depth and meaning would take me at least a week or so to write and perfect. Great write. Dawn |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Nothing meaningless about this one, Sudhir, absolutely nothing! It's SO deep! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful! Very profound...and you did it in two minutes? Enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wasted our time? I think not. I am impressed that you could come up with such thoughts in two minutes. Nice way to unwind at work If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wowowow!!! this is really awesome poetry! it reminded me of trying to get everything out in your head in...oh...two minutes to a friend. great write sudhir...this is the first ive read from you and needless to say it wont be the last! great write once again  f t e |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
If only I could pen in two hours what you pen in two minutes. "you never get somewhere and back it is always somewhere and beyond destination is the horizon, constantly changing" So profound. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes, sometimes scribbling thoughts at a fast rate help release unwanted energy caused by stress... Thanks a lot for all your kind words, and please understand that 2 minutes or 2 hours or 2 weeks, they are all the same, as long as the thoughts appear in a written form. Each thought is deeply profound, and there is a comic nature to every profound thought as well. You guys are the best. Thanks again. Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you're reaching deep for this one my friend. . . good. . . it's good to see you stretch like this. . . lots to think about here. . . and, of course, I love the line from Jethro Tull. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you Sir Sven... My regards, Sudhir |
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